Question

16．假设Bill是你的同学，请介绍一下他的相关情况：
1、一名来自于澳大利亚的学生，会唱歌、拉小提琴，所以想参加音乐俱乐部；
2、每天早晨6：30起床，乘校车上学，路上通常花半个小时；
3、喜欢动物，如老虎、熊猫、猫等，他认为猫友好、聪明，熊猫可爱；
4、喜欢看电视，经常帮助他妈妈做家务活．

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
He thinks cats are friendly and smart他认为猫很友好聪明．
think后是省略that的宾语从句．
【高分句型二】
It takes him about half an hour to get to school by bus乘坐校车上学花大约半个小时．
it takes sb+时间+to do sth 某人花多少时间做某事．

解答 This is my good friend．His name is Bill．He is 14 years old．He can sing and play the violin．And he is good at them．So he wants to join the music club．（一名来自于澳大利亚的学生，会唱歌、拉小提琴，所以想参加音乐俱乐部）Bill loves animals．He thinks cats are friendly and smart．【高分句型一】Pandas are cute．（喜欢动物，如老虎、熊猫、猫等，他认为猫友好、聪明，熊猫可爱；）They are our friends．Bill gets up at 6 o'clock in the morning．It takes him about half an hour to get to school by bus【高分句型二】．（每天早晨6：30起床，乘校车上学，路上通常花半个小时；）He likes watching TV．He is hard-working and he often helps his mum with housework．（喜欢看电视，经常帮助他妈妈做家务活．）

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