Question

【题目】书面表达

假设你是杰克，学校图书馆需要一个图书管理员（librarian）。请你写一封正式的推荐信给馆长Mr. Smith，介绍你的同学Peter当图书管理员。词数： 80左右，内容提示：

1.Peter懂礼貌和谦虚，每当他遇见老师和同学，都能礼貌地打招呼，他能交许多朋友。

2.他自信和聪明。勤奋而乐于助人，如果他尽力，他能作好任何事情。

3.他很有耐心，有条理，他能仔细计划好每件事。

Dear Mr. Smith，

I’m writing to recommend Peter as a librarian of our school library.

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I hope you can consider my recommendation.

Yours sincerely，

Jack

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Mr. Smith，

I’m writing to recommend Peter as a librarian of our school library.

Peter is very polite and humble. Whenever he meets the teachers and classmates， he will say hello to them politely .Because he is so friendly that he can make many friends.

He is confident and smart.. He is hard-working and willing to help others. If he tries his best， he can do anything well.

He is patient， methodical and he can plan everything carefully. All in all ， I think he is the right student to be a librarian of our school library.

I hope you can consider my recommendation.

Yours sincerely，

Jack

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇提纲作文。本文要写的材料比较具体：结束彼得三方面的情况，首先是和同学老师之间的关系结束，聪明仔细能尽力做好事情，有耐心能仔细计划每一件事情。根据内容可知用一般现在时，在写作时注意语言的准确性。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。

写作亮点：这篇短文内容切题，意思连贯，表达清楚、完整。在短文中运用了比较高级的复合句：If he tries his best， he can do anything well.；Because he is so friendly that he can make many friends.等。