Question

【题目】朋友是人生中的一大财富，请你根据以下的写作要点写一篇短文，介绍你最好的朋友Sally，同时分享一下你们维护彼此间友谊的心得。词数80个左右，短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数内。

写作要点：

关于Sally	1. 外貌：一双大眼睛，长长的头发，和我一样高； 2. 性格：待人友好，脸上经常带着微笑； 3. 兴趣爱好：喜欢唱歌跳舞（和我一样）。
维护友谊的心得	1. 每天一起骑自行车上学, 周末一起到图书馆看书； 2. 下课后经常一起聊天，分享快乐和烦恼； 3. 对彼此诚实，······(自拟一项)

Sally is my best friends. We met at a party 10 years ago.____________________________________________

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I hope our friendship will last forever!

Answer 1

【答案】Sally is my best friends. We met at a party 10 years ago. Sally is a beautiful girl with two big eyes and long hair. She is as tall as me. She’s always friendly to others and wears a big smile on her face. Both of us like singing and dancing. Every day we go to school by bike together. At the weekend, we go to the library to do some reading. We often talk with each other after class and share our happiness and worries. We are always honest to each other and help each other when we are in trouble.

I hope our friendship will last forever!

【解析】

这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如a beautiful girl with two big eyes and long hair，as tall as me，be friendly to others，wear a big smile on her face，both of，like singing and dancing，go to school，by bike，at the weekend，do some reading，talk with each other，after class，by reading，be honest to，in trouble等。而with复合结构Sally is a beautiful girl with two big eyes and long hair.和She’s always friendly to others and wears a big smile on her face. / We often talk with each other after class and share our happiness and worries./ We are always honest to each other and help each other when we are in trouble.等并列结构的运用，丰富了短文内容，使表达多样化，是本文的最大亮点。在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章表达更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。