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12．根据要求完成短文写作，请将作文写在答题卡指定的位置上．
作为一名中学生，假如有一天你所在的地方突然发生地震，你认为你能做些什么和不能做什么？请你以"How to keep safe when an earthquake happens？"为题写一篇短文．
内容包括：1．保持镇定，迅速躲到安全的地方（move to a safe location）去，如坚固的桌子下面．
2．可以用手或软的东西保护（protect）脸和头．
3．当确定震动停止时尽快跑到户外，若已在户外，就要远离高的建筑物．
4．不要乘坐电梯．
作文要求：1．不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称和学生的真实姓名．
2．语句连贯，词数80个左右．
How to keep safe when an earthquake happens？
It's important for us to keep safe when an earthquake happens．We should pay attention to the following：First of all，we must keep quiet，and then move to a safe location quickly，such as under the hard tables．Second，we should protect our faces and heads with hands or other soft things．Third，when the shake stops surely，we should run out as soon as possible and try to be far away from buildings．If you are outside，remember to keep away from tall buildings．Last but not least，don't take the elevator at this moment．．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇提纲作文．内容是以"How to keep safe when an earthquake happens？"为题说说地震时候应该如何应对．时态主要为一般现在时．人称主要为第一人称．
写作思路：考生需要首先审清主题，围绕主题展开作文．
其次考生可从以下几个方面展开作文，即本文的写作要点：
1．保持镇定，迅速躲到安全的地方（move to a safe location）去，如坚固的桌子下面．
2．可以用手或软的东西保护（protect）脸和头．
3．当确定震动停止时尽快跑到户外，若已在户外，就要远离高的建筑物．
4．不要乘坐电梯．
常用到的重点短语：
pay attention to 关注
keep+adj保持怎么样
run out跑出去
as…as possible尽可能的…
try to do sth 尽力做某事
keep away from  远离
last but not least最后也是最重要的
【高分句型】
1．①It's important for us to ②keep safe③when an earthquake happens．
①it is+adj+for sb+to do sth对某人来说做某事是怎么样的，it是形式主语，动词不定式做真正主语．
②keep+adj保持怎么样
③when引导的时间状语从句．
2．Third，①when the shake stops surely，we should②run out ③as soon as possible and④try to be⑤far away from buildings
①when引导的时间状语从句．
②run out跑出去．
③as…as possible尽可能的…
④try to do sth 尽力做某事
⑤far away from离…远

解答 How to keep safe when an earthquake happens？
It's important for us to keep safe when an earthquake happens．【高分句型】We should pay attention to the following：First of all，we must keep quiet，and then move to a safe location quickly，such as under the hard tables．（保持镇定，迅速躲到安全的地方去，如坚固的桌子下面）Second，we should protect our faces and heads with hands or other soft things．（可以用手或软的东西保护脸和头）Third，when the shake stops surely，we should run out as soon as possible and try to be far away from buildings．【高分句型】If you are outside，remember to keep away from tall buildings．（当确定震动停止时尽快跑到户外，若已在户外，就要远离高的建筑物）Last but not least，don't take the elevator at this moment．（不要乘坐电梯）

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