Question

根据中文大意和英文提示词语，写出意思连贯、符合逻辑、不少于60词的短文。所给英文提示词语仅供选用，请不要写出你的真实校名和姓名。

学校要举行“My dream job in the future”主题演讲比赛，要求大家以此为题，写一篇演讲稿。内容包括：你的梦想职业，你的理由和所做的努力。

hobby, favourite, free time, work hard, try to do, come true

My dream job in the future

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Answer 1

【答案】

 

My dream job in the future

My dream job is to be a writer. Reading is one of my hobbies. Whenever I am free, you can find me bury myself in the story books I am interested in. Those books help me know a lot about the world, such as history, geography, science, society and so on. I wish I could be a writer and write many good books for the people.

Now I’ve read quite a few books in Oxford Bookworm series, and written several stories. Some of my teachers and friends say they are wonderful. I wish my dream would come true.

【解析】

试题分析：这篇短文要求我们以My dream in the future 为题写一篇演讲稿，内容要包括你梦想的职业是什么、你选择这一职业的理由以及你为实现梦想所做的努力三个方面。写作时要注意这三个方面，不要遗漏要点。题目中给了我们一些我们可能用到的关键词，像hobby, favourite, free time, work hard, try to do, come true等。写作时要注意意思连贯、完整，并且要有逻辑性。通过审题可知，这篇短文我们应主要使用一般现在时，第一人称。

【亮点说明】这篇范文写得是比较优秀的，在文章的开头作者就先点明了主题，自己梦想的工作是当一名作家，开门见山，很直接。接下来叙述了自己选择这样职业的理由，并且理由很充分。第二段主要写了自己为了实现梦想所做的努力，并在最后表达了梦想会实现的决心。内容完整，意思连贯。文中还用到了一些较好的句型，如Whenever I am free, you can find me bury myself in the story books I am interested in、Those books help me know a lot about the world, such as history, geography, science, society and so on、  Now I’ve read quite a few books in Oxford Bookworm series, and written several stories等。

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