Question

10．假如你是李华，你的英国笔友David发邮件向你咨询如何学好汉语．请根据提示和要求用英语给David回复邮件．

要求：1．除上图所给提示外，再写出两条如何学好汉语的建议；
2．文中不能出现真实的人名和校名；
3．字数90词左右．邮件的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数．
Dear David，
    I'm glad to receive your email．Here's some advice on how to learn Chinese well．
It's a good idea to watch movies．You'll find it helpful to improve your listening skills．Reading always plays a key role in language learning，so do more reading in your spare time．
In my opinion，you'd bettermake more Chinese friends．They'll be glad to lend you a hand and it provides a good chance for you to learn about Chinese culture．It's a wise choice to use your cell phone，which allows you to use apps，QQ or WeChat to learn Chinese．
Practice makes perfect，so do remember to keep practicing every day!
Follow the advice，and I'm sure you can learn Chinese well!
Best wishes．
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 ①It's a good idea to watch movies．看电影是个好主意．句子中It's a good idea to dosth做某事是个好主意，it作形式主语，to引导的不定式作真正的主语．
②In my opinion，you'd better make more Chinese friends．在我看来，你最好结交更多的中国朋友．句子中In my opinion表示在我看来；had better最好，后面跟动词原形．

解答 Dear David，
I'm glad to receive your email．Here's some advice on how to learn Chinese well．（引出话题）
It's a good idea to watch movies（高分句型）．You'll find it helpful to improve your listening skills．（通过看电影学习中文）Reading always plays a key role in language learning，so do more reading in your spare time．（通过大量阅读学习中文）
In my opinion，you'd better make more Chinese friends（高分句型）．They'll be glad to lend you a hand and it provides a good chance for you to learn about Chinese culture．It's a wise choice to use your cell phone，which allows you to use apps，QQ or WeChat to learn Chinese．（我对学习中文的看法）
Practice makes perfect，so do remember to keep practicing every day!（熟能生巧）
Follow the advice，and I'm sure you can learn Chinese well!（结束语）
Best wishes．
Yours，
Li Hua

点评 结合命题作文的特点，首先要审好题，严格按照要求去组织文章，并抓住重点．要注意语句通顺、意思连贯．在阐述理想的原因的时候要恰当使用表示顺序的词，使这一部分很有条理．要善于运用好的句型如主语从句、动词不定式和倒装的使用等为文章增色，表达更流畅．要习惯用英语式的思维去组织句子，避免汉语式的英语．