Question

假如你是一个无锡新市民，你叫Luo Hui, 来自湖南，目睹了无锡最近几年的发展和变化，有喜有忧。于是你就给政府有关部门发了一份e-mail，谈了一些自己的想法，并提出了一些合理的建议，内容要点如下：
1. 最近几年无锡发展很快；比如，道路变宽了；城里可供人们休闲的场所也多了；这里的人们过着幸福的生活；
2. 但是还存在一些严重的问题：房价太高，许多人根本买不起房子；因为工业的发展，水和空气被严重污染；人们很难呼吸到新鲜空气。
3. 我的建议：……
注意：1. 短文须包括所有内容要点，要求语句通顺，意思连贯；
2. 第3要点作2-3句话的适当发挥；
3. E-mail的开头已给出，不计入总词数。
4. 词数：80个词左右。
Dear Sir or Madam,
How are you? It’s my great pleasure to write this e-mail to you.
My name is Luo Hui. I’m a middle school student. I moved to Wuxi with my parents five years ago because my parents found work here. ________________________________________
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Yours sincerely,
Luo Hui

Answer 1

 
Wuxi has developed quickly. For example, the roade become wide. There are many place for people to relax. Tth people here are living a happy life.
But there are still some problems. The prices of th e house are too high. Many people can’t afford to buy them at all. Water and air are badly terribly polluted. It is difficult for people to breathe fresh air.
I think we should stop some factories from dumping their waste into the river. We should also encourage people to protect our environment.

试题分析：这是一篇提纲式的给材料作文。要求介绍无锡市的变化及存在的问题，并提出自己的建议。
【亮点说明】这篇短文能表达出所有的要点，并提出了合理的建议。同时连词的应用和句式的变化也给文章增色不少.如For example, But， It is difficult for people to breathe fresh air.。