Question

一首 “ Where is the time？” 又一次引发了人们对时间的感慨，作为即将参加中考的你，将怎样充分利用时间，为初中三年画上一个圆满的句号。请从以下几个方面，以“ Treasure every minute”为题，写一篇不少于100词的短文。（文章里不能出现真实校名和人名）
（1）时间的重要性        (2) 你身边浪费时间的现象
（3）你的时间去哪儿了  （4）你将怎样充分利用余下的时间？
Treasure every minute
                                                                                     
                                                                                             
                                                                                    
                                                                                                                                                                                          

                                                                                             
                                                                                    
                                                                                  

Answer 1

People often say, "Time is money," But in fact time is more valuable than money. If money is spent, we can earn it back. However, if time is lost, it will never return. This is the reason why we must value time. The time we have is limited. But there are a lot of people who do not know the importance of time. They spend their time chatting, smoking or drinking .They do not realize that wasting time is simply wasting their valuable life. As for me, I spend most of my time doing homework.In a word, every minute is precious,we should make full use of our time.  Do not leave what can be done today to tomorrow.

试题分析：这是一篇提纲作文。本文作者写怎样充分利用时间，为初中三年画上一个圆满的句号。全文主要用一般现在时态。
【亮点说明】文中使用了非常好的短语和句子为文章增色不少，例如in fact,a lot of, spend doing,As for,most of ,make full use of,In a word等短语，文中还用到了条件状语从句If money is spent, ,if time is lost, 宾语从句that wasting time is simply wasting their valuable life.; 定语从句a lot of people who do not know the importance of time.文章层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。