Question

假如你是王平（Wang Ping），初中即将毕业，给安德森（Anderson）发了份电子邮件，告诉他你将如何度过这个暑假。（90词左右，包括所有要点，可适当发挥）
要点：1、跟随父母一起做的一件事，如出去旅游、拜访亲友等等；
2、自己的日常生活安排情况，如做家务、坚持锻炼、读书、适当看电视、完成作业等；
3、计划做一件对你将来的学习、生活有帮助的事。如学钢琴、参加夏令营等活动；
Dear Anderson，                                                                    
How is everything going? I am very happy to tell you                                 
                                                                                  
                                                                                  
                                                                                  
                                                                                  
                                                                                  
                                                                                  
                                                                                  
                                                                                  
Your Sincerely,
Wang Ping

Answer 1

Dear Anderson，                                                                    
How is everything going? I am very happy to tell you about my summer holiday. I am leaving from my school in July. I will have a long Summer holiday. I will go to Beijing with my parents because my grandparents live there. There are lots of beautiful places. We want to visit them on the vacation. I usually do the chores. In the moring, I will go for a walk in the park. Then read some famous books, do my homework, watch TV. I will plan to learn to play the piano,or I will take part in a Summer Camp because these activities can help me to learn more. I think we can chat on the Internet. You can help me with my English and I can tell you about my story. Do you agree? I am looking forward to hearing from you!
Your Sincerely,
Wang Ping

试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文。本文所给材料比较详细，我们要做的就是用正确的英语把这些内容表达出来。动笔前要认真阅读材料，不可遗漏要点，并适当发挥。根据材料内容可知本文主要是一般现在时态，主语是第一人称，注意时态语时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中正确使用动词的适当形式，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。
【亮点说明】这篇短文采用乐观者的角度与焦虑者的观点进行对比，恰当好处运用了形容词的比较级，从而更清晰的表达出中心思想。最后作者提出 自己的想法，使文章内函得到升华，那就是共同努力创建美好家园。