Question

【题目】书面表达

86. 如今，中学生的学习时间长，压力大。上周我班学生对如何减压、放松进行了讨论。大家提出了许多种减压、放松的方法。请根据提示，以How Can We get relaxed为题，写一篇短文。

词汇：压力pressure

要求：

（1）词数：80~100个。

（2）开头已给出，不计入总词数。

（3）要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥

How Can We Get Relaxed

These days, many students study too long every day and suffer from great pressure. Last week, my class had a discussion on how to get relaxed and reduce the pressure.

Answer 1

【答案】These days, many students study too long every day and suffer from great pressure. Last week, my class had a discussion on how to get relaxed and reduce the pressure。

The students offered different good suggestions. As well as going to the movie, listening to music, even going sightseeing at the weekends, some students think it a good way to take exercise between lessons. After all, too long study without exercise is harmful to our health. Other students feel it important to communicate with our parents. We can get help from them when we are in trouble.

In my opinion, we should spend a little time developing our hobbies like reading or doing sports while working hard. In this way, we can get relaxed and reduce the pressure.

【解析】

本文属于话题作文，主要讲述如何减压放松。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。

亮点说明：这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别使用一些亮点词句，如as well as，a good way to，take exercise，after all，be harmful to，communicate with，get help from，be in trouble，in my opinion，spend+时间+（in）doing以及in this way，增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。