Question

请根据以下要点提示，以“A Bad Weekend”为题写一篇80词左右的短文，谈谈你周末所经历的事情。可适当发挥。
1. 和同学们约好上周六去五峰山玩。
2. 约定在早上8:00在火车站见面，乘火车去那儿。
3. 由于前一晚我睡得太晚，第二天醒来时已经7点半。
4. 没有吃早饭匆忙赶到车站，同学们已经乘车走了。
5. 难受极了，过了个很糟糕的周末。
A Bad Weekend
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Answer 1

A Bad Weekend
I made an appointment with my classmates to go to visit Wufeng Mountain last Saturday. We decided to meet at the train station at 8:00am, and then take a train to go there. Since I went to bed very late the night before, it had been already 7:30 when I woke up the next morning. I didn’t have breakfast and went to the station in a rush. But by the time I got to the train station, my classmates had left by train. How sad I was! What a bad weekend!

首先，审好题，题目是“A Bad Weekend”要写出周末经历的事情，突出“bad”，认真找出题目所给写作提纲的1—5条中所列的核心词。将其翻译出来。如：去五峰山玩go to visit Wufeng Mountain，上周六last Saturday，约定made an appointment，最后再来组句，排列词组，形成句子。I made an appointment with my classmates to go to visit Wufeng Mountain last Saturday。在第二条中，找到乘火车take a train，去那儿go there，连起来就变成take a train to go there。在火车站at the train station，在早上8:00 at 8:00am或者at 8:00 in the morning,这个句子有2部分，最后连一下变为We decided to meet at the train station at 8:00am, and then take a train to go there.第三句也一样，首先要找到前一晚the night before，睡得太晚went to bed very late，第二天the next morning，已经already，醒来woke up，由已经一词判断要用完成时，并且整篇时态都是过去的，所以用过去完成时。与完成时连用，用since来表示“由于”更好。第四第五一样，要找到短语，可表达为上面的句子，也可这样来写：My classmates had left by train when I hurried to train station whithout breakfast.What a bad weekend I spent !