Question

为了解同学们的理想，我们在学校的l00名学生中进行了一次调查采访。采访主要是围绕“What do you want to be when you grow up?”和“Why?”这两个问题进行的，请你根据以下调查数据写—份以“the dream jobs”为主题的报告．并谈谈你自己的理想与原因。词数80个左右。(报告开头语已给出．不计人作文总词数。)

The Dream Jobs
In order to help us form good ideals (理想), we made a survey among 100 students in our school. Here are the results.                                          
                                                                              
                                                                              
                                                                              
                                                                              
                                                                              
                                                                              
                                                                              
                                                                              
                                                                              

Answer 1

The Dream Jobs
In order to help us form good ideals, we made a survey among 100 students in
our school last week. Here are the results.  Most of the students want to he businessmen, because they want to be rich and buy what they need in the future. More students are dreaming of being doctors, because they are proud of saving the sick people . And being good teachers is some students’ dream. They think it’s a pleasure to make students learn more from them.
Different students have different ideals. As for me, I want to be a policeman, and make our society much safer.

试题分析：这是一篇命题作文。在要点中给出了写作的大致方向，需要自己发挥的地方较多。动笔前要先认真阅读要点，然后围绕要点适当发挥，确定时态主要词汇等问题。写作中，应注意描述的全面性，尽量将提示的内容利用上；语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯。另外，在描述时，应该注意人称的变化。