Question

【题目】书面表达。(16分)

近日，我市某区在争创“全国文明城区”(“national civilized city”)，为此他们采取了大量措施来改善环保，交通等状况。中学生应该为创建“全国文明城区”做贡献。

请你写一篇短文，谈谈你的一些观点。

要点提示：

1．简单介绍此活动：

2．活动给人们带来的益处（至少2点）：

3．中学生应该怎样做（至少3点）：

要求：1．词数：80词左右。

2．文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。

3．短文必须包括所有要点。

Answer 1

【答案】

In order to build a national civilized city,the government has done many things and great changes have taken place in our city in the past few years. People’s lives have improved greatly. It is much easier to get into or out of the city because railway station, airport and BRT have been in use. What’s more , the city is becoming cleaner and tidier and looks very beautiful.

we students should try our best to behave well in our life.

First, we should keep our clothes clean and tidy. Be polite and friendly to others and always ready to help the people in need. For example, when we are on a bus, we should give our seats to the old and the women with babies. Then, our city should be kept clean every day. Don’t throw rubbish everywhere. Finally, we should also obey traffic rules. When the traffic lights are red, we should stop. And we'd better not talk or laugh loudly in public.

If everyone behaves well, our city will be more and more beautiful in the future.

【解析】

试题分析：考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题，确定文章的中心。注意文章文体、人称和时态。写出顺序的词来表达文意更清楚。完成提示词时也要符合事实。温馨提醒：考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。

写作亮点：这篇短文进行了较为全面的说明，能用简短的词汇表达出提纲的内容，并且进行了适当的处理，准确的添加自己的观点，同时使用了一些固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少。使文章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理。