Question

假如你是李明，请你用英语向校长写一篇80个词左右的建议信。信中不能出现真实的班名和姓名。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear headmaster,
I’m very glad to write a letter to you. These days we are talking about how to have a better school life. Here are some of my suggestions. First, I hope our school will
Hope my suggestions will be helpful. Thanks for reading my letter!
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming

Answer 1

Dear headmaster,
I’m very glad to write a letter to you. These days we are talking about how to have a better school life. Here are some of my suggestions. First, I hope our school will open the library more often. Second, I think our school can organize more after-class activities. Next, I hope our school will give us more time for sports, art and music. And I suggest our school should organize fewer exams as well
As for our teachers, I hope they will be our friends and make classes more interesting. And if they can talk less but more clearly in class, we will be more interested in studying and have more time to practice. What’s more, I hope they will give us less homework and finish classes on time.
Hope my suggestions will be helpful. Thanks for reading my letter!
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming

解析试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文，本文已经给出了主要写作要点，动笔前要先认真阅读要点，然后围绕要点适当发挥。写作中，应注意描述的全面性，尽量将提示的内容利用上；结合材料内容，可知本文主要是第一人称，一般现在时态进行叙述。语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯。适当使用连词，做到上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。
【亮点说明】这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少。如:be glad to很高兴做某事；talk about谈论……；thanks for谢谢……等。序数词first，second及联系as，and等的使用使得本文逻辑清楚，上下文联系紧密。学习中注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用, 让文章更出彩。
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