Question

20．暑假快到了，请你根据下面的提示，用英语写一篇短文，给计划要去旅行的朋友一些提
醒和建议．要求：
1．所给的提示词要全部用上；
2．要点完整，语言准确，每一点做适当的拓展；
3．词数：60词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）

What to do	travel with，know…about，take，drink…
What not to do	go to dangerous places，swim alone…

When you plan to take a trip on your holiday，you should prepare well for it．           

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一
 You should plan to travel with your friends．你应该和你的朋友一起去旅行．should，应该，表示建议．  
   高分句型二
  If you like to swim，remember you shouldn't swim alone．  如果你喜欢游泳，记住你不应该独自游泳．  这是if引导的条件状语从句，如果…．

解答 When you plan to take a trip on your holiday，you should prepare well for it．   You should plan to travel with your friends．【高分句型一，注意时间状语从句的使用】Friends can help keep you safe and share the fun．【开头点明主题】
     You should plan where you want to go．You should know something about the weather there and take the right clothing．You need to carry a map and decide what you want to visit．
     You should be careful．Don't go to dangerous places．If your trip is in the summer，you had better drink lots of safe water．You should put on a hat and don't stay in the sun too long．If you like to swim，remember you shouldn't swim alone【高分句型二，注意if引导的条件状语从句的使用】．【正文部分详细介绍建议】
     Enjoy your holiday trip!【结尾紧扣主题】

点评 本篇写作需注意要求中所提供的要点，不可遗漏．需在平时积累相关的词汇，写作中注意语义通顺，符合逻辑关系．上下文之间可以适当使用连接词．如but，so，then等．