Question

10．Write at least 60words on the topic"My mother's daily life"．
（写一篇至少60个单词题为"我妈妈的日常生活"的短文，标点符号不占格）
Suggested questions：
•What is your mother's job？
•What does your mother usually do in the morning/after work…？
•What do you think of your mother？
                                                    

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一
 She has lunch in the hospital，but she never talks when she has lunch．她在医院吃午饭，但她吃饭时从不说话．这是when引导的时间状语从句，当…时候．   
高分句型二
 she still tries her best to make people healthy．她仍然尽力使人们健康．try one's best to do sth．尽某人最大的努力做某事．

解答 My mother is a doctor．She is hard-working．【要点一，妈妈的工作】She always goes to work at six o'clock and comes back home at eight o'clock．She has breakfast at 5：10 a．m．She often has a long break in the afternoon，for about one to two hours．She has lunch in the hospital，but she never talks when she has lunch【高分句型一，注意时间状语从句的使用】．She has dinner when she comes back．During working，she works attentionally．Although she is not a famous doctor，she still tries her best to make people healthy【高分句型二，try one's best to do sth．的使用】【要点二，妈妈的日常生活】．She is a good doctor，and she is a good mother，too．【要点三，你觉得妈妈怎么样】

点评 本篇写作需注意要求中所提供的要点，不可遗漏．需在平时积累相关的词汇，写作中注意语义通顺，符合逻辑关系．上下文之间可以适当使用连接词．如but，so，then等．