Question

如今社会上越来越多的人喜欢饲养宠物，有些人甚至把养的宠物视为家庭的一名成员。而养宠物也引发了一系列的社会问题，如：咬伤小孩、随地大小便、污染环境等。那么，同学们是怎样看待饲养宠物这一现象的呢？请根据以下提示以“Pets”为题写一篇80个词左右的短文，谈谈自己的看法和观点。（首句已给出，不计入总词数）
提示：1. 宠物是人们的好朋友，能给人带来快乐和温暖；
2.宠物能帮助人做各种事情;
3.养宠物浪费时间和金钱；
4.宠物传播疾病，污染环境，危害我们的健康。
Pets
Recently, more and more people like to keep pets.

Answer 1

Recently, more and more people like to keep pets. Some of them even regard their pets as one of their family members. They say that pets can help them do some useful things and bring them joy and happiness . I also like pets. Pets are our good friends. But I don’t think it’s good for people to keep so many animals as pets. Why? Because too many pets may cause a lot of problems. For example, if there are more pets on the streets, it’s easy for people to get some diseases from them. Sometimes , some pets are dangerous to people. What’s more, keeping pets may cost people lots of time and money. 

试题分析：考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题，确定文章的内容。提示给出了两方面的材料------养宠物的优点和养宠物的缺点。材料给的是当下的普遍社会现象，所以用一般现在时态即可。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。温馨提醒：考生必须谈及自己的看法和观点。
【亮点说明】本文内容充实，包含了所给的所有提示，并按要求谈到自己的观点。文章运用了一定的复合句和重点句型，显示了作者的基本功，如：They say that pets can help them do some useful things and bring them joy and happiness。But I don’t think it’s good for people to keep so many animals as pets。it’s easy for people to get some diseases from them。另外，运用了Why，For example，What’s more等插入语使得文章衔接紧凑，过度自然。