Question

4．加拿大中学生Peter在你校学习期满，回国后写来一封感谢信，同时指出了同学们的一些不良行为，假如你是学生会主席李华，请根据要点提示给Peter回一封电子邮件．
要点提示：
1．表示感谢；
2．表达意思（告别高声喧哗、乱丢乱扔等不良行为）；
3…
要求：
1.80词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
2．文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称．
Dear Peter，
I'm glad to receive your email．Thank you for telling us so much．Tm very sorry for what we have done．As a student，we should learn to have good habits．First，we will keep quiet in public．Also，we will no longer throw things here and there．What's more，we won't write or draw on the desks and other places，and we will be more polite to others．
I'd like to invite you to visit our school again．I'm sure you will see a cleaner school．
Best wishes！
                                                                                    Yours，
                                                                                    Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型：
①I'm glad to receive your email．我很高兴收到你的电子邮件．句子中be glad to do sth表示高兴做某事．
②I'd like to invite you to visit our school again．我想邀请你再来参观我们的学校．句子中would like to do sth表示想做某事；invite sb to some place邀请某人去某个地方．

解答 Dear Peter，
   I'm glad to receive your email．（高分句型）Thank you for telling us so much．I'm very sorry for what we have done．（引出话题）
   As a student，we should learn to have good habits．First，we will keep quiet in public．Also，we will no longer throw things here and there．What's more，we won't write or draw on the desks and other places，and we will be more polite to others．（作为学生，我们应该做的事情）
   I'd like to invite you to visit our school again．（高分句型） I'm sure you will see a cleaner school．（提出邀请）
   Best wishes!
                                                   Yours，
                                                   Li Hua

点评 本篇作文由于提纲材料本身决定了写作对象、范围、目的、体裁等，命题者的意图往往较容易领悟，考生在审题上一般不会出现障碍．可根据内容要点提示运用相关的句型结构灵活的展开作文．考生需注意不要逐词逐句地进行翻译，所写句子要符合英语的表达习惯．