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9．毕节市准备举办"美丽毕节 从我做起"大型英语主题演讲比赛，请以"How to make Bijie more beautiful"为题，用英语写一篇80词左右的演讲稿，要求内容完整，意思连贯，语句通顺，书写规范．How to make Bijie more beautiful
Bijie is a beautiful city that is famous in China．But something imperfect happens to it at times．So it's important for us to make it more beautiful．
First，I should study hard to improve ourselves．Good education is important for a beautiful city．
Second，I should be a greener person．I must try my best to make our environment cleaner and quieter．I should plant more trees，save water and reduce pollution．
Third，I should be friendly and polite to others．When people are in trouble，I should help them as much as possible．I should obey all kinds of rules and set an example to others．
I believe"nothing is impossible"．If everyone can make a contribution to Bijie，it will be more beautiful in the future．．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
So it's important for us to make it more beautiful．
句中使用句式为：it is+形容词+for sb to do sth．这句话意为：因此，对我们来说让它变得更漂亮很重要．
高分句型二：
If everyone can make a contribution to Bijie，it will be more beautiful in the future．
句中"If everyone can make a contribution to Bijie"为条件状语从句，使用短语有"make a contribution 做贡献"．这句话意为：如果每个人可以为毕节做贡献，将来它会更漂亮．

解答 How to make Bijie more beautiful
  Bijie is a beautiful city that is famous in China．But something imperfect happens to it at times．So it's important for us to make it more beautiful．【高分句型一】（点明主题）
  First，I should study hard to improve ourselves．Good education is important for a beautiful city．
  Second，I should be a greener person．I must try my best to make our environment cleaner and quieter．I should plant more trees，save water and reduce pollution．
  Third，I should be friendly and polite to others．When people are in trouble，I should help them as much as possible．I should obey all kinds of rules and set an example to others．（列举我能做的事情）
  I believe"nothing is impossible"．If everyone can make a contribution to Bijie，it will be more beautiful in the future．【高分句型二】（总结全文）

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