Question

【题目】 王婷是一名中学生,她每天非常认真刻苦地学习,但是感觉考试压力很大,为此,她很烦恼。假如你是辅导员Ada,请根据提示写一封回信给她。要求表达完整清晰,适当增加自己的观点,使文章更通顺,字数要求90个字。开头跟结尾已给,不计入字数中。

1. 了解到你有压力,但是不知道如何去改变你的生活。

2. 别怕,很多你这个年纪的学生都会有这样的问题。

3. 考试没什么不好,但是不要过多关注每次考试后的成绩,为何不试着学会放松?

4. 可以多穿橙色的衣服,橙色代表快乐。感觉不开心的时候,橙色可以使你振奋起来。

5. 我还建议...... (自己的观点)

6. 希望我的建议值得采纳。

Dear Wang Ting,

Thank you very much for telling me about your problems.

Best wishes,

Ada

Answer 1

【答案】例文

Dear Wang Ting,

Thank you very much for telling me about your problems. You feel stressed and you don't know how to change your life. Don't be scared. Many students of your age have this problem. I don't think the exam is bad. But don't pay too much attention to the results after each test. Why not try to learn to relax. You can wear more orange clothes. Orange stands for happiness. When you feel sad, orange can make you happy.

I also suggest you go for a walk with your friends on the weekend. Talking about school life with your parents is a good idea to relax.

Best wishes,

Ada

【解析】

1、题干解读：这是一篇书信作文。假如你是辅导员Ada，请根据提示写一封回信给王婷。她是一名中学生，她每天非常认真刻苦地学习，但是感觉考试压力很大，为此她很烦恼。要求根据提示的内容完成作文。写作时要注意语句通顺，语意连贯，紧扣要点，注意句子之间的连接与过渡，要注意涵盖所给提示。