Question

13．请根据以上短语，选择不少于两种习惯，并结合自身经历与感受用英语写一篇短文，向你们班上的同学介绍一些好的学习或生活习惯．
要求：=1．文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息；=2．条理清楚，语义连贯，句式规范，字迹工整；=3．词数为80～100；短文开头已给出，不计入总词数．
Dear classmates，
It is very important for us to have good habits．As a student，it is a good habit to listen to the teacher carefully in class．And we had better take notes when necessary．It is also a good habit to finish the schoolwork on time and help each other with our studies．
It's necessary for us to do sports for about an hour every day．Then we should do something to relax after we finish the homework at home．Before sleeping，we can read some books we like so that we can learn more about the world．
A good habit will really help us in our study and daily life．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
It's necessary for us to do sports for about an hour every day．
句中使用句式为：it is+形容词+for sb to do sth．这句话意为：对我们来说每天运动一小时很必要．
高分句型二：
Before sleeping，we can read some books we like so that we can learn more about the world．
句中"so that we can learn more about the world"为目的状语从句．这句话意为：睡觉之前我们可以读一些喜欢的书，以便于我们可以更多地了解这个世界．

解答 Dear classmates，
It is very important for us to have a good habit．（开篇点题）
As a student，it is a good habit to listen to the teacher carefully in class．And we had better take notes when necessary．It is also a good habit to finish the schoolwork on time and help each other with our studies．（好的学习习惯）
It's necessary for us to do sports for about an hour every day．【高分句型一】Then we should do something to relax after we finish the homework at home．Before sleeping，we can read some books we like so that we can learn more about the world．【高分句型二】（好的生活习惯）
A good habit will really help us in our study and daily life．（总结全文）

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