Question

根据中文和英文提示，写一封意思连贯、符合逻辑，不少于50词的文段。

目前，北京的车越来越多，对空气产生极大影响。某网站在开展出行方式大讨论。假如你是李华，你喜欢哪种出行方式？请根据提示词语和相关问题，给网站投稿。稿件的开头和结尾已给出，其词数不计入总词数。

请将稿件的内容写在答题卡上。

提示词语：expensive, relax, easy, be good for, reduce, save energy

How do you go to school, by car, by bus, by bike or on foot?

Which way is the best?

What are the advantages?

Dear Editor,

I know you are organizing a discussion about the ways of going out. I’m a middle school student and I want to join the discussion.

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Yours respectfully,

Li Hua

 

Answer 1

Nowadays, you can see more and more people riding bikes on the road and I am one of them. I go to school by bike because I think it’s the best way. Why do I like riding a bike? Let me tell you the reasons.

First, it's not expensive to buy a bike and I can afford one or more. Second, I can relax myself while riding a bike. It’s good for my health and it’s easy to get a place for a bike. Third, the most important thing is that riding bikes can not only reduce pollution but also save energy. I hope everybody can ride a bike to go to school, go to work and travel to other places.

Let's ride bikes from now on!

【解析】

试题分析：这篇作文要求我们以李华的身份给一个网站投稿，内容是关于现在由于车多而带来的污染问题。这篇作文中已经给了我们开头，我们需要接着这个开头继续往下写。作文中的内容主要有三个部分，一是你自己上学的方式，二是哪种方式是最好的，三是这样做的优点是什么。我们在写的时候，不要遗漏要点，可以适当补充。写这篇作文的时候，一定要注意明确写作的主题，并主要围绕这种交通方式的好处来展开，这是文章的主体部分。另外，要注意语句之间的连接，多用一些好的词汇和短语，使文章表达流畅，内容完整，语句通顺。

【亮点说明】这是一篇比较优秀的范文。这篇短文中作者着重写的是自己的上学方式以及这种方式的好处。文章主题鲜明，主次分明。首先，作者就开门见山点明了自己的上学方式—骑自行车，go to school by bike because I think it’s the best way。接下来是这篇作文的中心，为什么喜欢骑自行车上学。作者给了我们三个理由。这里面使用了比较多好的短语和句型，如it's not expensive to buy a bike and I can afford one or more、It’s good for my health、the most important thing is that riding bikes can not only reduce pollution but also save energy。而且这些句型在使用时都非常的正确。这篇短文语句通顺，表达流畅、完整。

考点：提纲类作文。