Question

Writing 2(2015 江苏镇江)

     帮助他人，快乐自己。李华一家常在周末去社区参加志愿者活动。假如你是李华的同学，请根据提供的信息介绍李华一家，描述他们上周六所做的事,你对他们的做法有何感想？你是否愿意参与类似的活动？说明理由。

人物	职业与爱好		具体活动
爸爸	电脑工程 师	修理	为邻居检修电 脑
妈妈	公司经理	DIY	为社区的老人 包粽子
李华	中学生	下棋	教小学生下棋
你	....

要求：

1. 所写内容必须包括提供的所有信息，可适当发挥。

2. 评价李华一家的做法;表达你的意愿,并说明理由。

3. 文章不少于90词，开头已给出，不计人总词数。

4. 语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确，条理清楚，字迹工整。

5. 文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名及地点。

       I am Li Hua’s classmate and I’ve known that he and his parents often go to the community centre to do some voluntary work.                                                                                                                                                                                                                

Answer 1

Writing 2 [写作要点]

1. 本文属于记叙文，主体时态是一般现在时和一般过去时。

2. 内容要点：

① 介绍李华一家；

② 介绍上周六李华一家人所做的事；

③ 对李华一家所做的事作出评价；

④ 说明自己是否愿意参加类似的活动并给出理由。

3. 词数不少于90.

[参考范文]

    I am Li Hua;s classmate and Fve known that he and his parents often go to the community centre to do some voluntary work.His father is a computer engineer.He’s good at repairing things.His mother is a manager of a company. She likes DIY.Li Hua is a middle school student.He plays chess well.

    Last Saturday,his family went there again.His father checked and fixed computers for neighbours. His mother made rice dumplings for the elderly people there. Li Hua taught some primary school students to play chess.

    I think what his family do is meaningful. I also want to be a volunteer like Li Hua.I will clean the house for the old people.

    As we know,helping others is helping ourselves.lt can also bring happiness to us all.