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3．近来，"光盘行动（Clean Plate Campaign） 悄然流行，提倡"节约型社会（economized society）"已成共识．请你根据下列表格中的信息，用英语为某英语报社写一篇短文，谈谈作为一名中学生，在日常生活中应该如何勤俭节约、反对浪费，并作简要评论．

What to do	What not to do
◆turn off the light ◆save as much paper as possible ◆…	◆not use one-off chopsticks（一次性筷子） ◆not spend money buying unnecessary things ◆…

注意：（1）短文须包括上述要点，应适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
（2）词数：80词左右，短文的标题和开头已给出（不计人总词数）．
Let's start with the things around us!
Recently，the"Clean Plate Campaign"has been very popular with many people．Our government is doing its best to build an economized society．
As a middle school student，I thinkweshould join in the campaign．We can start the things around us．Firstly，make sure that the lights are turned off when we finish our work and leave the room．Secondly，we can save as much paper as possible．Thirdly，it is important for us to form the habit of turning off the tap after it is used．What's more，we must not spend money buying unnecessary things．When we eat，we'd better not use one-off chopsticks and we mustn't waste food．
In a word，saving energy is very important．Let's work together from now on!．

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
Thirdly，①it is important for us to form the habit of turning off the tap ②after it is used．第三，对于我们来说，养成用水后随手关水龙头很重要．
①it is+adj+for sb+to do sth对某人来说做某事是怎么样的，it是形式主语，动词不定式做真正主语．
②after表示在…之后，引导时间状语从句．
【高分句型二】
①When we eat，②we'd better not use one-off chopsticks and we mustn't waste food．我们吃饭时最好不要用一次性筷子，不要浪费食物．
①when引导的时间状语从句．
②had better do sth 最好做某事．

解答 Let's start with the things around us!
  Recently，the"Clean Plate Campaign"has been very popular with many people．Our government is doing its best to build an economized society．
As a middle school student，I think we should join in the campaign．We can start the things around us．Firstly，make sure that the lights are turned off when we finish our work and leave the room（随手关灯）．Secondly，we can save as much paper as possible．（节约用纸）Thirdly，it is important for us to form the habit of turning off the tap after it is used．【高分句型一】（关水龙头）What's more，we must not spend money buying unnecessary things．（不买不必要的东西）When we eat，we'd better not use one-off chopsticks and we mustn't waste food．【高分句型二】（不用一次性筷子，不浪费食物）
     In a word，saving energy is very important．Let's work together from now on!

点评 半开放性作文给出了一个话题，并有部分的文字提示．给考生自由发挥的余地较大．对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力．在完成开放性作文时，首先要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型，在你的能力范围之内，选择句式时要赋予变化，因为这样你才可以更好的驾驭．同时也要选择合适的连接词，把各个要点组织成一个完整的整体，如besides，further，last but not least等．在发表个人观点的时候，可以使用谚语来提升整个文章的档次和文采，也能增加得高分的可能性．