Question

4．健康是一个重要话题．健康的身心，能使我们和谐相处、愉快学习．为此，学校英语广播站举行"健康成长"征文比赛活动． 请你根据要求写一篇80词以上的短文． 内容要求健康重要；
2．如何做到身心健康（饮食、起居、运动、沟通）．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇提纲作文．内容是围绕健康的重要性及获得健康的途径展开作文．时态主要为一般现在时．人称主要为第一人称．
写作思路：考生需要首先审清主题，围绕主题展开作文．
其次考生可从以下几个方面展开作文，即本文的写作要点：
1．健康重要；
2．如何做到身心健康（饮食、起居、运动、沟通）
常用到的重点短语：
try one's best to do sth尽某人最大的努力做某事
First of all…Secondly…首先，第二
instead of而不是
at least 至少
besides除了
get along with sb与某人相处
play a part扮演一个角色
communicate with  sb与某人交流
高分句型：
Try to exercise every day or at least two or three times a week and relax ourselves by listening to light music．
本句是一个祈使句，是and连接的两个并列句，表示提出建议．at least至少，by doing sth表示通过某种方式作方式状语．
Besides the physical health，we also need friendship．
besides是介词，表示除…之外（还有），本句承上启下．

解答 Growing Up Healthily!
Growing up healthily is our duty．Every one of us should try our best to keep ourselves healthy．（健康重要）
First of all，keep a balanced diet．We should eat a lot of vegetables and fruit every day．Don't eat junk food．Drink water instead of cola（饮食）．
Secondly，get enough sleep and enough exercise．Early to bed and early to rise help a lot to our health． Try to sleep eight or nine hours every night．Try to exercise every day or at least two or three times a week and relax ourselves by listening to light music．（高分句型）（起居和运动）
Besides the physical health，we also need friendship．（高分句型）We should try to get along well with people around us．We can share our problems and happiness with them．And we should often communicate with our parents and teachers．Communication plays an important part in our life．（沟通）
A healthy lifestyle and communicating well with others can help us grow up healthily．（总结概括全文）

点评 本篇作文由于提纲材料本身决定了写作对象、范围、目的、体裁等，命题者的意图往往较容易领悟，考生在审题上一般不会出现障碍．可根据内容要点提示运用相关的句型结构灵活的展开作文．考生需注意不要逐词逐句地进行翻译，所写句子要符合英语的表达习惯．