Question

9．电视是我们生活中不可或缺的一个部分．通过电视，我们可以获取很多知识，同时它也有很多弊端．请结合你的生活实际，谈谈看电视的利与弊（advantages and disadvantages）
要求：（1）书写工整、语言连贯．
（2）文中不得出现与本人有关的真实信息．
（3）词数：80左右．
Advantages and Disadvantages of Watching Television
Nowadays，watching television has become more and more popular in our life．By watching TV，we can see many-things happen around us without going out every day，and it helps us get the newest information．We can also learn some useful knowledge．
But every coin has two sides．Television programmes are not always suitable for all ages．Sometimes，there are some movies that children and teenagers should not watch．If we watch TV too long，it may hurt our eyes and bodies． Therefore，I think we shouldn't spend too much time on TV and should choose programs carefully when we watch it．．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇提纲作文．内容是谈谈看电视的利与弊（advantages and disadvantages）．时态主要为一般现在时．人称主要为第三人称．
写作思路：考生需要首先审清主题，围绕主题展开作文．
其次考生可从以下几个方面展开作文，即本文的写作要点：
1．看电视的有利之处
2．看电视的弊端
3．我的建议
常用到的重点短语：
比较级+and+比较级 越来越…
without除了…没有…
help sb do sth帮助某人做某事
be suitable for 适合于…
spend time doing sth花时间做某事
高分句型：
Nowadays，①watching television has become②more and more popular in our life．
①动名词短语做主语，谓语动词用单数．
②比较级+and+比较级 越来越…，more and more popular 越来越受欢迎．
But every coin has two sides．
谚语every coin has two sides凡事都有两面性的运用，承上启下．

解答 Advantages and Disadvantages of Watching Television
Nowadays，watching television has become more and more popular in our life．（高分句型）By watching TV，we can see many-things happen around us without going out every day，and it helps us get the newest information．We can also learn some useful knowledge．（看电视的有利之处）
But every coin has two sides．（高分句型）Television programmes are not always suitable for all ages．Sometimes，there are some movies that children and teenagers should not watch．If we watch TV too long，it may hurt our eyes and bodies．（看电视的有利之处）
   Therefore，I think we shouldn't spend too much time on TV and should choose programs carefully when we watch it．我的建议）

点评 以提纲提供情景的作文．要注意遣词造句的灵活性和语法规则的正确性，就不会造成审题不清而偏离主题，但要注意，文章必须覆盖所提供的各个提纲的要点．行文间要注意简化描述，用简短的语句代替冗长的语句．在作文完成的时候，应该检查、修改，以免遗漏一些需要表达清楚的要点和细节