Question

根据要求完成小作文（共5分）
你喜欢的一个朋友。（30—40字）

Answer 1

A friend
I have many friends in my life, but the friend I like best is Hellen. She is a beautiful girl with two big eyes and a small mouth. She likes smiling. She likes singing, dancing and reading. Blue is heir favorite color. She likes playing sports, too. Now, we are playing volleyball. She is a good volleyball player, and she can play it very well. I like her very much. We are good friends.

试题分析：这是一篇命题作文，描述你喜欢的一个朋友。可以从他的外貌、喜欢等方面去描写。全文主要用一般现在时，第一人称。写作时注意表达的准确性，同时多使用一些短语和句型，使句意连贯，文章表达流畅，富有条理。
【亮点说明】这篇短文整体表达流畅、意思连贯，先点明了朋友是谁，然后从朋友的外貌说起，还提到了朋友的爱好。文中使用了较多的句型和短语，如a girl with two big eyes and a small mouth、like doing sth.、too 等。结构完整，层次分明。