Question

目前，学生考试作弊现象严重，请围绕以下要点谈谈其中原因以及个人建议。
原因：1.考试太滥   2.自身勤奋不够   3.把大量时间用在上网和玩游戏上  4.为了骗取家长和老师高兴
看法与建议：1、作弊有害；2、要做人诚实，学习发奋；3、学校应减少考试。
要求：1、字数80—100；2、围绕要点可适当发挥；3、文章开头已给出，不计入总字数。
At present, a number of middle school students have picked up a bad habit——cheating in examinations.
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Answer 1

At present, a number of middle school students have picked up a bad habit — cheating in examinations.
There are three main reasons. First, schools have given students too many exams, some of them are too difficult.
Second, some students are not hard-working and they don’t work hard at their lessons. Third, they waste a lot of time playing games or surfing the Internet. So they haven’t enough time to prepare for the exams. Finally, students have to do so to make their teachers and parents happy.
In my opinion, cheating in exams does great harm to our study. We students should be honest and diligent, and
only in this way can we improve our study and make progress. Besides, our teachers should offer us fewer exams and more time to study for ourselves.

试题分析：首先要认真阅读前面的提示，认清写作要求和提纲之间的关系，要求考生根据所给的写作要求和提纲，确定文章的中心思想，然后紧紧围绕中心思想展开写作。注意文章文体、人称和时态。根据所给提纲，列出要点，并以此为基础充分发挥自己的想象力，灵活运用英语知识，采用不同的表达方式将各要点完整地表述出来，注意主次分明，详略得当。语言力求准确、简洁。根据情景的发展，按顺序安排好材料。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。温馨提醒：考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。
【亮点说明】文中使用了非常好的短语和句子为文章增色不少，比如. a number of middle school students have picked up a bad habit；Second, some students are not hard-working and they don’t work hard at their lessons还运用了短语does great harm to ；have enough time to prepare for 以及用了倒装句only in this way can we improve our study and make progress.等。并注意了句子的衔接如：First，Second，Third，Finally，In my opinion, Besides等等。层次分明，表达流畅。