Question

【题目】书面表达

假设你是Millie，根据以下内容写一封给网友Jane的信。

1. 北京是一个繁华的城市，有许多名胜古迹。

2. 有许多博物馆、公园和购物中心。这些使北京的生活更舒适和丰富多彩。

3. 上个月邀请了叔叔Tom游览北京。他为人慷慨，有幽默感。

4. 当他到达时，不能相信自己的眼睛。他说建筑变得更高了。他决定尽快把这些告诉他的朋友们。

注意：1)正确地书写格式和使用时态。 2)短文必须包括所有要点。

3)词数80左右，可适当增加细节，使句子通顺、连贯。

Dear Jane,

Yours

Millie

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Jane,

Beijing is a busy city with many places of interest. There are many museums, parks and shopping centers. All these make life in Beijing more comfortable and colorful.

Last month, I invited Uncle Tom to visit Beijing. He is generous and has a good sense of humour. When he arrived here, he couldn’t believe his eyes. He said the buildings became taller and taller.He decided to tell his friends about these as soon as possible.

I hope you can come and enjoy yourself here too.

Yours,

Millie

【解析】

试题分析：考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题，确定文章的中心。注意文章文体、人称和时态。本文主要是向笔友介绍北京的情况，并通过邀请叔叔来北京介绍了北京的变化情况注意要用到一般过去式。温馨提醒：考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。

写作亮点：本文结构紧凑 开头指出北京有很多名胜古迹，之后介绍了邀请叔叔来北京参观通过叔叔的感受可知北京的变化，最后向笔友提出邀请。Beijing is a busy city with many places of interest.；I invited Uncle Tom to visit Beijing；He decided to tell his friends about these as soon as possible.这些短语和句子的运用也让文章增色不少。