Question

【题目】写作

假设你是大明，你的笔友给你来信了。请阅读下面的来信，并写一封回信。

要求：１.80词左右；２.文中不要出现作者本人的真实信息。

Dear Daming, I’d like to tell you something about my “important gift”. It was a beautiful smile. When I was nine years old, I went to a new school. So no one knew who I was. I felt lonely. Then one day when I sat at my desk unhappily as usual, a girl walked to me and smiled. Though she said nothing, I felt the touch of something bright and friendly and it made me feel happy and warm. After that she became my good friend. As we all know, everybody may feel lonely or be in trouble. Could you tell me something about your “important gift” that touched you or changed your life? Yours, Susan

Dear Susan,

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Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Susan,

I am glad to read your letter and your“important gift” really touches me. As for me, my “important gift” was my mum’s sad tears. Two years ago, I became a “problem child”, and I was tired of everything. I did everything that was against my parents. That made my mum very sad, but she still loved me as usual.

One night, I lost my reason and broke a glass, which caused my mum to burst into tears. All at once, her sadness touched my deep heart. Since then, I have completely changed myself.

Best wishes,

Daming

【解析】

试题分析：给笔友写一封回信，需要先读懂来信的内容，根据来信可知，回信要回答的是使自己感动的事情或改变生活的事情。因为叙述的是过去的事情，所以句子的主语应该用一般过去时，要注意上下文的衔接。

写作亮点：短文用了一些短语和句式，如：As for me, my “important gift” was my mum’s sad tears. Two years ago, I became a “problem child”, and I was tired of everything. I did everything that was against my parents. That made my mum very sad, but she still loved me as usual. One night, I lost my reason and broke a glass, which caused my mum to burst into tears.用了which引导的定语从句，增加了文章的亮点。