Question

在一次英语班会上,老师请同学们以“Proud of My School”为主题发言。请根据下面所给的提示写一篇发言稿。词数要求在80左右。
提示：①What does your school look like?
②What fun do you have at school?
③Why do you like your school?

Answer 1

My school is very big. There are several tall buildings in it. There are more than 2000 students in my school. We have a big playground with lots of trees around it. There are a lot of flowers everywhere.
We have a lot of fun at school every day. After class we play games and do lots of sports, such as  playing basketball, football ，tennis and so on. We work very hard and do very well in our lessons.
I love my school because it’s like a big family. The teachers in my school are very kind to us. I am proud of my school because it is one of the best schools in my heart.

试题分析：这是一篇提纲作文。本文主要是以演讲稿的形式写自己为什么以学校为自豪， 全文以一般现在时态为主。
【亮点说明】文中使用了非常好的短语和句子为文章增色不少，例如 more than， lots of，a lot of ，at school，every day，have  fun，After class，such as，and so on，do very well， in my school ，are very kind to ， be proud of，等短语，用到原因状语从句如because it’s like a big family，because it is one of the best schools in my heart；多次用到there be句型如There are several tall buildings in it.；with独立主格做定语如with lots of trees around it。文章层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。