Question

【题目】书面表达

假如你所居住的城市环境污染越来越严重，请根据提示写篇短文说明污染原因，并呼吁人们爱护环境，保护地球。

提示：

1.污染原因:工厂燃烧东西制造能量；人们大量砍伐树木；公路上汽车数量的增多，污染空气；人们乱扔垃圾，污染土地。

2.呼吁保护环境：1. 多植树；2. 停止乱扔垃圾；3. 自己补充一点保护环境的方法

要求：

1. 内容要点齐全，可以适当发挥。

2. 正确运用人称、时态、语法等。

3. 词数要求：70个左右。

4. 短文的开头已给出，不算入总词数。

Protect the Earth

The environment in my city is becoming worse.

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Answer 1

【答案】Protect the Earth

The environment in my city is becoming worse. Because some factories are burning things to make energy and cut down trees that many animals are disappearing. Besides, there are many cars today, which will pollute the air badly. What's more, people often throw away a lot of rubbish every day. This pollutes the land.

We must stop polluting our earth and try our best to protect it. First, plant more trees to clean the air. Second, people shouldn’t burn things to make energy because this pollutes the air. Third, Don’t throw away a lot of rubbish every day cause it pollutes the land. Finally, don’t put waste into the rivers and seas cause it can pollute the water.

Earth is our mother. Without earth, without life. So we should try our best to protect our it.

【解析】

本文属于材料作文，说明你所居住的城市环境污染越来越严重的原因并呼吁人们爱护环境、保护地球。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。

亮点说明：这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别使用一些亮点词句，如because, besides, what’s more, throw away, try one’s best do do, first, second, third, last以及which引导的定语从句，增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。