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3．如今，中学生的假期生活发生了很大的变化．假如你是李明，你的新笔友Alan想了解你在即将到来的暑假中的生活．请你根据以下提示和要求，给他写一封信．内容包括：
1．自我介绍；=2．学习情况和休闲方式；
3．适当上网和锻炼；=4．帮忙做家务，参加社会活动．
注意：1．条理清楚，字迹工整，词数80词左右，围绕主题可适当发挥；
2．信的开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数；
3．文中不得出现真实的姓名和地名．
参考词汇：go for a trip；take exercise；surf the Internet；social activities．
Dear Alan，
I'm very glad to introduce myself to you．My name is Li Ming．I'm a student in the Middle School．I will tell you something about my holiday．
Our holiday life has changed a lot．Learning and relaxing are still very important to us．Besides，I surf on the Internet three times a week，and I do some exercise every morning．I often help our parents do housework or farm work．Through that，we realize how hard our parents work every day．And we can make a habit of laboring at the same time．Also，we take an active part in social activities as volunteers．Sometimes，we go to the streets to collect rubbish or go to the hospital to cheer up the sick children．We try our best to help people in need and make our hometown more beautiful．We find great pleasure in all these activities．
Best wishes!
Please write to me soon．
Yours，
Li Ming．

Answer 1

分析 本文是一篇提纲作文，要求是假如你是李明，你的新笔友Alan想了解你在即将到来的暑假中的生活．请你根据以下提示和要求，给他写一封信，也就是说，本文要以第一人称来写，写作内容要包括：1．自我介绍；2．学习情况和休闲方式；3．适当上网和锻炼；4．帮忙做家务，参加社会活动．还要有适当的发挥，只要不脱离主题即可．

解答 Dear Alan，
I'm very glad to introduce myself to you．My name is Li Ming．I'm a student in the Middle School．I will tell you something
about my holiday．
Our holiday life has changed a lot．Learning and relaxing are still very important to us．Besides，I surf on the Internet
three times a week，and I do some exercise every morning．I often help our parents do housework or farm work．Through that，we
realize how hard our parents work every day．And we can make a habit of laboring at the same time．Also，we take an active
part in social activities as volunteers．Sometimes，we go to the streets to collect rubbish or go to the hospital to cheer up the sick children．We try our best to help people in need and make our hometown more beautiful．We find great pleasure in all these activities．
Best wishes!
Yours，
Li Ming

点评 本文是一篇以提纲提供情景的作文，写作时要注意必须覆盖所提供的各个提纲的要点，且要有适当的发挥，千万不能做成翻译题．行文间要注意简化描述，用简短的语句代替冗长的语句，以使整篇短文意思连贯，表达流畅．