Question

根据下面表格所提供的信息，写一篇70词的短文，介绍你的笔友Jane的家庭及她的活动, 可适当发挥。

Name		Jane
家庭成员		父亲、母亲、妹妹（5岁）
职   业		父亲：办公室职员 母亲：教师 Jane：学生
Jane 的 活 动 时 间 表	6:10	起床
	6:30	吃早餐
	7:20	去上学
	12:15	吃午餐
	17:00	回家
	17:40	帮妈妈做饭
	18:25	吃晚餐

Answer 1

I have a pen pal. Her name is Jane. Her father is an office worker. He works in an office. Her mother is a teacher. She teaches English in a high school. Jane is a student. She has a sister. Her sister is only five years old. Jane usually gets up at 6:10. She has breakfast at 6:30 and goes to school at 7:20. Jane has lunch at a quarter past twelve. In the afternoon, she goes home at five o’clock. Then she helps her mother cook supper. They have dinner at six twenty –five.

试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文，介绍一个新笔友。本文做给材料比较详细，动笔前先根据材料确定时态，句式，词汇等主要内容。根据内容可知本文主要是一般现在时态，人称应该是第三人称。写作中注意使用连接词，注意表达的多样化，做到语意连贯符合逻辑。
点评：在写书面表达是首先要注意的问题就是人称，不能混淆人称；其次，应注意动词的英语，根据不同的人称确定动词的形式；再次，句型应该符合英语的表达习惯；最后，用自己熟练掌握的句型造句。