Question

按要求写一篇关于旅行的文章，以“My happy trip”为题，字数70词左右，要求包括以下内容：

1. 旅游地点

2. 和哪些人一起去的

3. 天气情况，交通方式

4. 旅游过程中所经历的活动

5. 旅游感受。

My happy trip

 

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

My happy trip

On my last summer holiday,I took a bus to Mount Tai with my friends.It took us about two hours to get there.Then we began to climb the mountain,There were many trees and flowers on it.And there were also a lot of visiters.Some of them come from the other countries,At noon,we sat under a big tree and had some food.All of the food was delicious.We took many photos during the trip.We were tired but we all had a good time.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇提纲作文。本文所给材料比较详细，我们要做的就是用正确的英语把这些内容表达出来。动笔前要认真阅读材料，不可遗漏要点，并适当发挥。根据材料内容可知本文主要是叙述过去的经历，应用一般现在时。写作中注意人称、时态的变化以及主谓一致问题；注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。

【亮点说明】这篇短文能够根据提纲要求，把与写作相关的内容进行归纳整合，内容覆盖所有要点，语言表达准确，意思连贯，符合逻辑。在文章的组织上灵活使用一般过去时，文章脉络清晰，自然流畅。同时，文章中还使用了一些的常用的句式和短语，这为文章增色不少。在学习中注意总结,牢记一些常用句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章的表达更有逻辑性。

考点：提纲作文。