Question

按要求写一篇关于旅行的文章，以“My happy trip”为题，字数70词左右，要求包括以下内容：

1. 旅游地点

2. 和哪些人一起去的

3. 天气情况，交通方式

4. 旅游过程中所经历的活动

5. 旅游感受。

My happy trip

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

I went to climb the Great Wall with my parents this summer vacation. I’m glad to know you’re interested in this trip. I’ll tell you as much as possible now.

The Great Wall is one of the greatest wonders of the world. It attracts thousands of tourists both at home and abroad every day. It runs across the mountains, like a dragon.

When we got there we were very excited that we began toclimbimmediately. The steps sometimes were very flat, but sometimes very steep. After two hours of climbing, we got to the top at last. I enjoyed the beauty of the mountains andtook a lot of photos. I felt really proud and thought of the famous saying: He who has never been to the Great Wall is not a true man.

If you come to China, I’ll be glad to take you to the Great Wall so that you can appreciate the beautiful scenery of the Great Wall.

【解析】

试题分析：考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题，确定文章的中心。注意文章文体、人称和时态。要求介绍。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。温馨提醒：考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。

【亮点说明】这篇短文不使用了大量的的短语，可见该生英语功底扎实。.如The Great Wall is one of the greatest wonders of the world。 I enjoyed the beauty of the mountains andtook a lot of photos.等，When，if等使文章的表达更丰富，更有逻辑性，更富有条理。

考点：话题作文。