Question

书面表达（15分）

根据提示，以“My friends and I”为题写一篇70词左右的短文，表达自己交友的观点。（你好友的名字叫Tina）

1、我们俩看上去很像，但有些方面不同；

2、我们都瘦，但Tina更瘦；

3、Tina比我高，比我更外向，比我读书勤奋；

4、我们都有黑眼睛、黑头发；

5、我们都喜欢体育节目，但我喜欢看肥皂剧，她喜欢看谈话节目，因为她希望有朝一日能成为一名电视台记者；

6、我们虽然有不同，但我们是好朋友。

My friends and I

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

My Friends and I

I like to have friends who are different from me. My friend is Tina. In some ways we look the same, and in some ways we look different. We are thin.But Tina is thinner than me.We both have black eyes and black hair. She is taller, quieter than me. And she studies harder than me. She is more outgoing and funnier than I. Both she and I like sports programme,but I like soap opera,she likes watching talk show,because she hopes to be a TV reporter one day.Though we are different in some ways,we are good friends.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇让小作者介绍自己和自己的朋友的文章。小作者把列举的要点写的很清楚。另外，写作时，小作者还注意了语句间的衔接，使文意连贯，表达流畅。

【亮点说明】这是一篇比较不错的作文。小作者写的这些内容也比较贴合文章的需要，意思也很连贯。文章中还用了一些比较好的句型，如Both she and I like sports programme,but I like soap opera,she likes watching talk show,because she hopes to be a TV reporter one day.Though we are different in some ways,we are good friends.

考点：考查提纲类作文。