Question

【题目】假设你是 Susan，在家里你的父母总是对你有很多要求，你是否有时感到厌烦？你是怎样解决的？请你根据下列要点提示用英语写一篇短文。

（1）父母要求你每天打扫房间；不能玩电脑游戏；晚上10点前必须睡觉

（2）你觉得父母虽太严厉，但理解他们。

（3）你决定与父母多交流，为父母做些家务。

（4）你认为……。

My name is Susan. There are many rules in my family.____________________________________________________

Answer 1

【答案】My name is Susan. There are many rules in my family. My parents want me to clean the room every day. I am not allowed to play computer games in my free time. I can’t go out on school nights. I must go to bed by 10 pm. I think my parents are too strict with me. Sometimes I feel bored, but I understand they really love me. I decided to communicate with my parents as much as possible, sharing my happiness and sadness with them. And I should often help them do housework because they are busy with their work, too. I’m sure if we trust each other, we will get on well with our parents.

【解析】

本文属于材料作文，针对父母对你要求过多你感到厌烦这一问题，你是如何解决的。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。

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