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8．"安全，是最大的幸福"．作为一名中学生，我们应该学会自我保护，远离危险，减少伤害．请你从以下要点提示中选取至少四条，以"Always Be Careful"为题，写一篇80字左右的英语短文．文章开头、结尾已经给出，不计入总字数．
要点提示：
1．遵守交通规则（不闯红灯、过马路不听音乐）；
2．户外运动发生意外时会急救；
3．下大雨时不要站在高处，远离大树；
4．如遇火灾、要冷静（打119、用湿布盖住嘴巴、不要乘坐电梯）；
5．不要独自下河游泳（发现有人溺水，要求救）；
6．其它方面（饮食、上网、交友安全…）
参考词汇：布cloth （n．）、急救first aid、溺水drown （v．）
Always Be Careful
As a middle school student，we should learn self-protection and stay away danger．Once we are in the street，traffic rules should be obeyed all the time．For example，never listen to music while riding a bike．Besides always follow the traffic lights．
If someone happens to get hurt，learn to get first aid quickly．When it rains，Don't stay on a high place and keep away from the big trees．If we are indoors when the fire is on，we should be calm．At the same time，we can call 119 and cover our mouths with wet cloth．Be sure not to take a lift．Don't go swimming by ourselves．If someone is drowning，call for help．And we should also pay more attention to our food and Internet safety．If all these are kept in mind，we are sure to enjoy a much safer life．

Answer 1

分析 根据题干可知：这是一篇提纲作文．主要写中学生应该注意安全的话题．
写作要点：1．遵守交通规则（不闯红灯、过马路不听音乐）；2．下大雨时不要站在高处，远离大树；
3．如遇火灾、要冷静（打119、用湿布盖住嘴巴、不要乘坐电梯）；
4．不要独自下河游泳（发现有人溺水，要求救）；
5．其它方面（饮食、上网安全…）
人称：第一人称为主；
时态：一般现在时态为主；
主要短语和句型：stay away from，远离…；
traffic rules，交通规则；
keep away from，远离…；
cover…with…，用…盖住…；
take a lift，乘电梯；
pay attention to，注意…；
be sure to，一定会．
高分句型：
1．If someone happens to get hurt，learn to get first aid quickly．
如果有人碰巧受伤，学会迅速急救．
if引导的条件状语从句，if，在此处意为"如果"，要遵循"主将从现原则"．
2．When it rains，don't stay on a high place and keep away from the big trees．
When引导的条件状语从句，When在此处意为"当…时候"．
don't stay on a high place and keep away from the big trees．否定祈使句．
3．And we should also pay more attention to our food and Internet safety．
情态动词的用法．情态动词should+动词原形．表示应该做某事．pay attention to 注意…

解答 参考答案：
As a middle school student，we should learn self-protection and stay away from danger．
   Once we are in the street，traffic rules should be obeyed all the time．For example，never listen to music while riding a bike．Besides always follow the traffic lights．（注意交通安全）
【高分句型1】If someone happens to get hurt，learn to get first aid quickly．【高分句型2】When it rains，don't stay on a high place and keep away from the big trees．（注意雨天安全）If we are indoors when the fire is on，we should be calm．At the same time，we can call 119 and cover our mouths with wet cloth．Be sure not to take a lift．（遇到火灾的情况）Don't go swimming by ourselves．If someone is drowning，call for help．（遇到溺水的情况）【高分句型3】And we should also pay more attention to our food and Internet safety．（饮食、上网安全）
   If all these are kept in mind，we are sure to enjoy a much safer life．

点评 本题主要考查提纲作文．写此类题目的作文，首先审题：要读懂题干内容和要求，抓住要点，注意文体，以及写作的人称和时态．然后根据提纲：抓住文章的中心，根据题干信息内容，考虑所要选用的单词，短语，句型．最后再修改，润色全文．