Question

【题目】书面表达

近几年来，越来越多的中国人出国旅游，但一些游客的不文明行为也成为国内外舆论关注的焦点。直接影响着中国“礼仪之邦”之形象。新华旅游局呼吁文明出游，游客应认真思考如何做一名“合格的旅游者”， 请以How to be a qualified tourist 为题目 写一则英语短文，谈谈自己的看法。

1 、保护环境，不随地吐痰，不乱扔垃圾。

2 、遵守公共秩序，不在公众场所喧哗，购物时排队。

3 、保护文物古迹，不到处乱涂乱刻，不攀爬触摸文物。

4 、节约用水用电，用餐不浪费。

注意：

1. 文章必须包括提示内容，可以适当扩展，增加细节使行文连贯；

2. 词数80左右；

3. 开头已经给出，不计入总词数；

4. 参考词汇：文物古迹cultural relics 文物artifacts

How to be a Qualified Tourist

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Answer 1

【答案】Recently, more and more Chinese people travel abroad , but some of them have bad manners .The poor behaviors or some Chinese have done great harm to our good reputation. How should we be a qualified tourist? In my opinion ,We have to understand and respect foreign cultures. First, we are supposed to protect the environment ,We shouldn’t spit or throw the rubbish everywhere. Second, we should obey the public order .We had better not shout loudly in public places , We have to wait in line when we are shopping .Third, we should protect the cultural relics. We mustn’t paint or carve on the monuments. We shouldn’t climb or touch artifacts. At the same time, we should save water and electricity. We are not supposed to waste food when we have meals . In this way, we'll win respect for ourselves as well as our country.

【解析】写作

这篇写作需要围绕“如何做一个合格的游客”展开写作，具体的要点已经给出了。写作的时候可以适当借助祈使句来表示“不应该做…”，需要注意使用恰当的方式引入文章，衔接好每个要点。

写作亮点：

开头应该对写作的背景进行一定的交代。“bad manners”表示礼貌状况不好，然后讲到了这些行为对中国的名声有害（have done great harm to our good reputation），这里用到了现在完成时，表示伤害已经造成了，产生了不好的影响，时态的妙用是一个亮点。紧接着发问引入主题。借助first, second等词串联起自己的观点。相关短语使用恰当，“are supposed to”（应该…），“spit or throw the rubbish everywhere”（四处乱扔垃圾），“protect the cultural relics”（保护文化遗产），最后文章有简练的收尾，we'll win respect for ourselves as well as our country.（我们会为我们自己和我们的国家赢得尊重），简练，完成了写作任务。