Question

最近你结识了一位新笔友，请根据以下信息，简单介绍一下你的新笔友。要求不少于50词。
名字：David  年龄：13 国籍：加拿大   居住地：多伦多 ( Toronto )    
语言：英语和法语 喜欢的动物：考拉，因为很可爱 .长颈鹿，因为对人很友好 。 
喜欢的天气：晴天和雪天。
爱好：看报纸，杂志，摄影，弹钢琴。    梦想：做一名记者（说出原因）

Answer 1

I am glad that I have a new pen pal. His name is David. He is a lovely boy. He comes from Canada. And now he lives in Toronto. He speaks English and French. His favorite animals are koalas and giraffes, because koalas are very cute. and giraffes are very friendly to people. He enjoys sunny days and snowy days, because she loves sunshine and snow. In his free time, he likes reading magazines and newspapers. He also likes taking photos and playing the guitar. He wants to be a reporter when he is older, because he thinks it is an interesting job. A reporter is very busy but he likes working with different kinds of people.
I like David very much and I hope his dream will come true!

试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文，介绍一个新笔友。本文做给材料比较详细，动笔前先根据材料确定时态，句式，词汇等主要内容。根据内容可知本文主要是一般现在时态，人称应该是第三人称。写作中注意使用连接词，注意表达的多样化，做到语意连贯符合逻辑。
点评：在写书面表达是首先要注意的问题就是人称，不能混淆人称；其次，应注意动词的英语，根据不同的人称确定动词的形式；再次，句型应该符合英语的表达习惯；最后，用自己熟练掌握的句型造句。