Question

俗话说“失去了才懂得珍惜”。三年过去了，我们即将毕业。你是否有一些让你感到遗憾或后悔的事情？如果再给你一次机会的话…… 请你以“Give Me Another Chance”为题，写一篇80词左右的短文，告诉我们你的想法。开头已给出，不计入单词总数。
温馨提示: 短文中请勿使用真实姓名、地点或所在学校名称。
Give Me Another Chance
How time flies! We have spent three years living and studying together in the school.

Answer 1

Give Me Another Chance
How time flies! We have spent three years living and studying together in the school.
Now, I am leaving our school. I want to enter a good school, but I am weak in English. I’m afraid I can’t succeed. I regret that I haven’t learned English well in the past three years. I missed many chances though my teacher encouraged me.
As the saying goes, “It’s never too late to learn”. If I have another chance, I should try my best to learn it well. I will practice listening, reading, speaking and writing as much as I can. I will preview lessons before class, listen carefully in class and finish my homework on time. I will ask my teacher for help if I have trouble. I believe I will cherish this chance and do it better.

试题分析：这是一篇命题作文。在要点中给出了写作的大致方向，需要自己发挥的地方较多。动笔前要围绕要点组织材料，确定时态主要词汇等问题，根据内容可知本文主要是过去时态和将来时态，注意时态和时间状语的搭配，注意条件从句的应用。写作中，应注意描述的全面性；语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯。
点评：本题给出的材料较为简略，可发挥的空间较大，所以自己可以选择自己比较熟悉的内容发挥，利用自己熟悉的单词句式等。