Question

【题目】书面表达。

假如你们学校今天举行了一场运动会，你和你们班的同学参加了一些项目的比赛。请根据表格内容，写一篇英语日记，描述这次运动会的概况。可适当发挥，不少于70词（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。

Name	Event	Result
Maria	girls’ relay race	first place
Liu Lin	the long jump	did badly
I	1000-meter race	first place

Monday, September 27th, Sunny

Our school held a sports meet today. _____________________________________

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Answer 1

【答案】

Monday, September 27th, Sunny

Our school held a sports meet today. It was a fine day and we participated the events we are good at. Maria took place in the girl's 100-meter rely and won the first place with other three girls. We all cheered up when they were in competition. But Liu Lin did badly on his long jump. He disqualified because he touched the red line three times on his last step in his running. What a pity he had because he is good jumper. I took part in the 1000- meter race. It was quite hard during the running. But I just kept my pace and tried my best. At last I won the first place. I was so happy. How wonderful the day was!

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇提纲式的给材料作文。假如你们学校今天举行了一场运动会，要求依据表格内容，写一篇英语日记，描述这次运动会的概况。动笔前要先认真阅读表格内容，围绕这些要点，把握需要用到哪些词组，如何运用一般过去时态来正确表达。然后适当发挥，可加入一些细节。同时注意文章要有一定的连贯性。

写作亮点：这篇短文内容切题，紧紧围绕写作要点，运用一般过去时态来完成这篇日记。意思连贯，表达清楚、完整。并加入了一些细节描写“He disqualified （取消资格）because he touched the red line three times on his last step in his running.” ；“But I just kept my pace and tried my best. At last I won the first place.” 使文章倍感生动。