Question

【题目】书面表达

假如你是李明，给你的笔友Jim写一封信，告诉他你是怎么保持身体健康不生病。70词左右。提示词：keep the air fresh, do exercise, food and drink, spit, throw litter around, habit, have a good rest.

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Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Tom,

Thank you for your letter. Now let me tell youhow to keep healthy in my daily life.

I often do sports to keep healthy. My favoutite sport is running. I run every day in the park. It can help to build me up and now I feel well and look fit.

Food can give us energy. I like eating more fruit and vegetables and less meat. And I also drink enough water every day. So I am very healthy, because I have healthy eating habits.

Best wishes.

Yours,

LiHua

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇提纲作文。本文要求按照要求给笔友写一封信，说明自己是如何保持健康的。写作中要按照题干的要求重点从运动和饮食方面进行陈述，表达出自己良好的生活习惯等。根据材料内容可知本文主要是一般现在时态，人称主要是第一人称，注意并列连词的使用及主谓一致问题。写作中注意上下文的过度，符合逻辑关系。

写作亮点：这篇短文简明、扼要地阐明了自己的生活方式，叙述了自己是怎样保持健康的。文中所要求的运动和饮食方面都得到了说明，符合文章的要求。其中使用了一些固定句式和短语，包含副词、连词以及形容词比较级的准确使用为文章增色不少.如build me up，feel well and look fit.，And，also，So，more fruit and vegetables and less meat.，学习中再注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章的表达更有逻辑性，更富有条理。