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4．健康的兴趣爱好不仅给我们带来快乐，还能帮助我们增长见识，学习技能，甚至会成为我们未来的工作．请以"My hobby"为题，结合自己自身的经历写一篇80词左右的英语短文．
写作要点：
1．What is your hobby？
2．Why do you have the hobby？/Why do you keep it as your hobby？
3．What have you learned from your hobby？
要求：
（1）文中不能出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称；
（2）词数：80左右．
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Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
Though I'm not good at it，I often lose myself in it．虽然我不擅长，但是我经常沉迷于此．
though引导的让步状语从句．不能与but连用．
【高分句型二】
When I am angry with something，it also can make me happy again．当我生气的时候，能让我再开心．
①when引导的时间状语从句．
②make sb+adj让某人怎样．

解答 My hobby
Everyone has our own hobbies，it may give us a lot of happiness．Then what's my hobby？My hobby is listening to music．（我的爱好是什么）When I was a child I enjoy listening to music especially the cartoon music．Though I'm not good at it，I often lose myself in it．（为什么有这个爱好）【高分句型一】When I am in trouble，music can make me calm down．When I am very tired，it can make me comfortable．When I am angry with something，it also can make me happy again．（爱好给我的帮助）【高分句型二】My parents think it's helpful for me．Listening to music keeps me in a good mood and it's good for my health．I can learn how to be happy in my life．（我能从中学到什么）
Do you like listening to music？If not，I hope you can have a try，you'll find it is so good．（给别人的建议）

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