Question

9．假定今天是六月十六日（星期六，天气晴朗），你和朋友去沙湖（Sand Lake）游玩．请根据下面所给内容写一篇日记，记录本次活动并简要谈谈感受．
提示：1．到达：上午九点；（Bird Island）
2．活动：乘船观鸟岛，骑马（ride horses），踢球，游泳，吃午饭，唱歌，做游戏．
3．返回：下午三点．
要求：词数：70左右，可以适当发挥．已给出的句子不计入总词数．
Saturday，June 16th SunnyToday my friends and I went to the Sand Lake．
                                               

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
But with the help of my classmates，I rode the horse best．但是在同学们的帮助下，我骑的最好．
with the help of在…的帮助下．
【高分句型二】
I hope I will come back again．我希望下次再来这儿．
复合句"I hope+宾语从句"的应用．

解答 Saturday，June 16th Sunny
Today my friends and I went to Sand Lake．We got Bird Island at nine o'ckock in the morning．（交待时间、地点）We visited Bird Island and we saw many kinds of wonderful birds there．After visiting Bird Island，we rode horses．It's my first time to ride a horse．At first，I was afried．But with the help of my classmates，I rode the horse best．【高分句型一】Then we swam in the pool and played football together．Some students sang and played games．After walking so long time，we all felt hungry and have lunch at a big restaurant．The food there is delicious．（游玩经历和活动）
At three  o'clock in the afternoon，we began to return to school．Although we are all tired，we had a great time．I hope I will come back again．【高分句型二】（对游玩的总结以及美好愿望）

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