Question

15．假如你是LinLing，学校根据表中新西兰来温暑期交流师生的意愿，决定安排他们去100公里外的许村游玩一天．但自行车来回路程需要8--9小时，权衡利弊，需调整这项内容，请你发邮件给对方带队老师Mr．Black做好说明、沟通工作．

A One-day Tour
Preferred activity	□Learn about Chinese education □See beautiful sights √□Learn about Chinese culture	Your idea √□No □Yes→What is it？
Preferred Place	□A school √□A village □A museum
Preferred transportation	□On foot √□By bike □By bus
Other needs	□No √□Yes→What is it？Tasto some local food

要求：（1）文中不能出现真实的姓名、校名等相关信息；
（2）文本长度：110词左右．开头和结尾已给出（不记人总词数）
Dear Mrblack．
I'm Lingting．My school asked us to make the one-day tour plan for you and we tried to make it best to your preterences，but I'm afraid we'll have to make some changes．
      ．
Locking torward to your reply．
Best wishes．
Lingling
小词典：

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cell n．＜生＞细胞	defence n．防御	fort n．堡垒
inspect v．检查	jaw n．下巴	pray v．祈祷
publish v．出版	recognise v．识别	version n．版本

Answer 1

分析 此题要求写一封电子邮件．时态用一般现在时态．动笔前应先认真阅读材料，围绕所给材料组织内容，确定主要短语，句式等问题．题中包含了这些要点：①将要去的地方；②交通方式即游览的地方；③自己的观点．注意不要遗漏要点，句子要通顺连贯，没有语法错误．
1．高分句型
We'll visit a mountain village called Xuecun，which is very famous for its old houses，fantastic sights and delicious food．我们要去参观一个叫做薛村的山村，这里因老房子，迷人的景色和美味的食物而闻名．这是which引导的一个定语从句，be famous for因…而闻名．
2．高分句型
So we think taking a bus there will be a much better choice．因此，我们认为乘公共汽车将是一个更好的选择．
这是一个动名词在宾语从句中作主语的句子，taking a bus there will be a much better choice在句子中为宾语从句，动名词 taking a bus there 在宾语从句中是主语．

解答 Dear Mrblack．
   I'm Lingting．My school asked us to make the one-day tour plan for you and we tried to make it best to your preterences，but I'm afraid we'll have to make some changes．
   We'll visit a mountain village called Xuecun，which is very famous for its old houses，fantastic sights and delicious food．I'm sure you will like it．【要点一】
   However，it will take us about 8 to 9 hours to go and come back by bike．Even if we set out at 7：00a．m．，we'll get there at about 11：30．Going around the beautiful，cultural places，inculding some old houses all with a history of over 500 years，it will take us at least 2 to 3 hours．Having lunch takes another hour．【要点二】What's more，it's very hot here in summer．So we think taking a bus there will be a much better choice．【要点三】
Locking torward to your reply．
Best wishes．
Lingling

点评 本篇写作需注意要求中所提供的要点，不可遗漏．需在平时积累相关的词汇，多阅读此类题材，将词汇归类整理；动笔前可以按照材料内容列出简单提纲，写出关键单词．写作中注意语义通顺，符合逻辑关系．上下文之间可以适当使用连接词，如but，so，then等．