Question

14．学校英语园地将举办"校园节约，从我做起"的主题征文活动．请你针对校园浪费情况，结合以下短语，适当发挥，以班级名义写一份倡议书．
What we often see in our school：
•leave the taps （水龙头） on after cleaning hands
•leave the lights on when leaving
•food left on the tables after meals
注意：
1．文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称．
2．语言通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范．
3．词数80左右，文章的开头已经给出，不计入总词数．
Dear schoolmates，
We are sorry to see so much waste in our school．We studentsoften leave the taps on after cleaning our hands，and leave lights on when weleave．At the dining hall，we can see food left on the tables after meals．
It's time for us to change now．We should notwaste any of our food．We should eat up all the food．We should not order thefood more than we can eat while dining out，because many people in the worlddon't have enough to eat．At the same time，I think we should save water andelectricity．We should make good use of our school things．Let's try to make agood habit and save things around us．Let's do it from now on．
Class 1，Grade 9．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇提纲作文．内容是针对校园浪费情况，以班级名义写一份倡议书．时态主要为一般现在时．人称主要为第一人称．
写作思路：考生需要首先审清主题，围绕主题展开作文．
其次考生可从以下几个方面展开作文，即本文的写作要点：
一，浪费现象：1洗手后不关水龙头．2离开后灯是开着的．3．饭后食物留在餐桌上．
二，我的建议．
常用到的重点短语：
eat up 吃光
at the same time 同时
make good use of 充分利用
from now on从现在开始
【高分句型】
1．We should not order the food①more than we can eat②while dining out，③because many people in the world don't have enough to eat．
①比较级的运用．
②while dining out省略句，完整表达while we are dining out．
③because引导的原因状语从句．
2．①Let's ②try to make a good habit and save things③around us．
①let sb do sth 让某人做某事
②try to do sth尽力做某事
③介词短语做后置定语，修饰前面的things．

解答 Dear schoolmates，
We are sorry to see so much waste in our school． We students often leave the taps on after cleaning our hands，and leave lights on when weleave．At the dining hall，we can see food left on the tables after meals．（浪费现象）
   It's time for us to change now．We should not waste any of our food．We should eat up all the food．We should not order the food more than we can eat while dining out，because many people in the world don't have enough to eat．【高分句型】At the same time，I think we should save water and electricity．We should make good use of our school things．Let's try to make a good habit and save things around us．【高分句型】Let's do it from now on．（我的建议和号召）
                                                             Class 1，Grade 9

点评 本文是一篇给材料作文，短文的开头已经给出．写作时先要围绕这些要点组织材料，确定写作内容，注意将这些要点全部表达出来，并且要有适当的发挥，在谈到自己的观点时，要结合活动内容，写出自己的观点．