Question

19．根据要求完成大作文．
为了迎接中考，同学们都在进行紧张的复习，部分学生的身体素质明显下降．这一情况已经引起社会的关注和教育部门的高度重视．
请你根据下面的要点和要求，用英语写一篇微博，建议大家在重视学习的同时，要适当进行体育锻炼．
要点：（1）锻炼身体的好处：strong，healthy，energetic…
（2）锻炼身体的方式：ball games，running，swimming…
（3）请你谈谈对学校开展体育锻炼的看法或建议．（至少写两点）
要求：1 语言通顺，意思连贯，书写规范；
2 60-80词．
Health is very important to us teenagers．Either study or work is based on strong body．Doing sportsevery day helps us keep healthy and energetic．If we don't take any exercise，we may feel tired and get sick easily．Just as the slogan says，"Exercise one hour a day，keep illness away!"
There are many kinds of sports we can do，such as running，swimming and ball games．
Now we students have to do too much homework after school．I hope teachers will leave us lesshomework so that we can have more time to take part in sports．I also hope our school can organize moresports activities for us．．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇提纲作文．内容是写一篇微博，建议大家在重视学习的同时，要适当进行体育锻炼．时态主要为一般现在时．人称主要为第一、三人称．
写作思路：考生需要首先审清主题，围绕主题展开作文．
其次考生可从以下几个方面展开作文，即本文的写作要点：
（1）锻炼身体的好处：
（2）锻炼身体的方式：
（3）请你谈谈对学校开展体育锻炼的看法或建议（至少写两点）
常用到的重点短语：
either…or…要么…要么…
help sb do sth 帮助某人做某事
keep heathy 保持健康
such as 例如
take part in参加
【高分句型】
1．①There are many kinds of sports ②we can do，③such as running，swimming and ball games．
①there be 有，谓语动词单复数遵循就近原则．
②we can do 是定语从句，修饰先行词sports，关系词which做宾语故省略．
③such as 例如
2．I hope ①teachers will leave us less homework ②so that we can have more time ③to take part in sports．
①省略了that的宾语从句，作为hope的宾语．
②so that引导的目的状语从句．
③动词不定式做目的状语．

解答 Health is very important to us teenagers．Either study or work is based on strong body．Doing sports every day helps us keep healthy and energetic．If we don't take any exercise，we may feel tired and get sick easily．Just as the slogan says，"Exercise one hour a day，keep illness away!"（锻炼身体的好处）
     There are many kinds of sports we can do，such as running，swimming and ball games．【高分句型】（锻炼身体的方式）
     Now we students have to do too much homework after school．I hope teachers will leave us less homework so that we can have more time to take part in sports．【高分句型】I also hope our school can organize more sports activities for us．（对开展体育锻炼的看法或建议）

点评 这是一篇提纲作文．考生在把握了文章的中心后，应在内心构思一个基本的框架，并考虑使用恰当的词语、短语和句型，以充分地表达文章的内容．尽可能地充分利用所学的短语或句型来表述具体的内容，避免使用无把握或偏、难句型．注意所写句子要符合英语的表达习惯．