Question

16．"光盘"一词在2013年有了新的定义，意为"吃光盘子里食物"，珍惜粮食，反对浪费．请结合要点提示，联系实际，适当发挥，以"I clear，I proud''为题，写一篇90字左右的英语短文．文章开头已给出，不计入总字数．文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息．
要点：
1、"光盘"行动的意义（两点）
2、从自己做起（两点建议）
3、请父母朋友们支持（两点建议）
I Clear，I Proud
Since a netizen（网友）called on people to"clear the plate"on the Internet，some citizens in Suzhou have taken action to support it．We middle school students should also do something to help．
With a large population in China，the food we waste every year causes a huge of money and energy，．It's time for us to wake up．Also，clearing the plate and sacing the food is a good habit for kids and the country later on．
First，we start from ourselves．We should not waste the food we have every day，especially the lunch at school．It's better to order the foodwe want and eat it up．
Second，our parents sometimes order too much when they eat in the restaurants．So we'd better tell them not to order too much and remember to pack the food home if there's any left．．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇提纲作文．内容是以"I clear，I proud''为题谈谈"光盘"行动的意义以及自己和父母朋友们的做法．时态主要为一般现在时．人称主要为第一、三人称．
写作思路：考生需要首先审清主题，围绕主题展开作文．
其次考生可从以下几个方面展开作文，即本文的写作要点：
1、"光盘"行动的意义（两点）
2、从自己做起（两点建议）
3、请父母朋友们支持（两点建议）
常用到的重点短语：
wake up 醒来
eat up 吃光
had better do sth 最好做某事
tell sb to do sth告诉某人做某事
remember to do sth 记得去做某事
【高分句型】
1．We should not waste the food ①we have every day，②especially the lunch at school．
①we have是定语从句，先行词是food，关系词which或者that做从句的宾语，故省略．
②especially副词，尤其是
2．So①we'd better ②tell them not to order too much and ③remember to pack the food home ④if there's any left．
①had better do sth 最好做某事
②tell sb not to do sth让某人不要做某事
③remember to do sth 记得去做某事
④if引导的条件状语从句．

解答 I Clear，I Proud
   Since a netizen（网友）called on people to"clear the plate"on the Internet，some citizens in Suzhou have taken action to support it．We middle school students should also do something to help．
   With a large population in China，the food we waste every year causes a huge of money and energy，．It's time for us to wake up．Also，clearing the plate and sacing the food is a good habit for kids and the country later on．（"光盘"行动的意义）
   First，we start from ourselves．We should not waste the food we have every day，especially the lunch at school．【高分句型】It's better to order the food we want and eat it up．（从自己做起）
   Second，our parents sometimes order too much when they eat in the restaurants．So we'd better tell them not to order too much and remember to pack the food home if there's any left．【高分句型】（请父母朋友们支持）

点评 以提纲提供情景的作文．要注意遣词造句的灵活性和语法规则的正确性，就不会造成审题不清而偏离主题，但要注意，文章必须覆盖所提供的各个提纲的要点．行文间要注意简化描述，用简短的语句代替冗长的语句．在作文完成的时候，应该检查、修改，以免遗漏一些需要表达清楚的要点和细节．